Essay On Education And Employment Opportunities

For a successful career, every student needs knowledge, confidence, academic and technical skills, career opportunities and social skills. To get these benefits college education is important. The importance of college education can be determined by the role it plays in our life. But before that, it’s really important that students know it very well that why they are joining a college, what will be the end results?

Education is most important thing in our life. And we spend maximum time in getting well educated in academic and technical degrees. I think a college education is a way to understand the things that we learned from 1st class to 12th in schools. School education goals can be to understand basic things that we have to use in life. And the college education goals can be how to sustain and grow in life.

The end results after college education are to do jobs and business. A high paying job in reputed position in government and private sector is the goal of many people. Some achieve these goals who understand the importance of college education. But not many achieve these career goals. And there are various reasons for that but let’s talk about the positive points about the importance of college education in this essay.

1. More Job opportunities for college graduates

There are private and government jobs in which required a bachelor degree. There are many things you can do after graduation such as you can apply for a job basis on your bachelor degree, you can participate in HAS/IAS competitive exams. You get admission in post-graduation programs. Well, the degree is not enough in private sector but it is required as an eligibility criterion in many govt. and private jobs. So, it’s not a good idea to ignore college education.

Even if you don’t want to go to college regularly, I suggest you can do your bachelor degree by corresponds /distance learning and private. Many universities provide distance learning programs and courses that you can do from home. Today with the help of technologies (computer/internet) you can get admission in online degree programs. The best you perform in the college theoretically and practically the more jobs opportunities are available for talented and hardworking students online and offline. If you’re interested to know about various jobs related competitive exams after graduation, here you can learn about it: List of entrance exams after graduation.

2. Improvement in Confidence and awareness

The college education increases the confidence level in students. They get freedom from the daily disciplined environment of the school. Discipline is very important in school life for students that help them to complete the school education with good marks. But in college, the rules are not as strict as they found in the school such as wearing the same colored or 1-2 dress for years. But in many colleges, there is no specific dress code for students. No overload of school bag and books. No lunch box. That was not bad but college makes changes in student’s attitude, style, thinking, observation and they start getting maturity.

Now students are confident and have a sense of achievement in joining college after successful completion of school education. And also the pocket money will be double.

Now they have a different kind of friends and thinking environment. They just love this. And because of so many changes, it will increase their confidence and awareness.

In schools, students are not much confident in answering question and debates. But in college, they get the opportunities and exposure for their thinking.

That’s why considering above points, I think a college education is very important for every student to get the new experiences those are less challenging than schools, except the presentational day.

3. Sense of Responsibility in College

The sense of duty or responsibility is the way of human development. When someone responsible for their own works and duty it will help a nation to build a social and economic development environment. And it starts with a college education. In which they find that professors are not that much worry like school teachers. They don’t force you to study, take a lecture, and do that or this. They just teach you the lessons, after that it’s your duty to learn it or not. They don’t care.

And this way, some students become responsible and take classes regularly with interest. In school, you have to take classes, you have to study, you have to do homework, it’s because in schools teachers have to answer to the authorities if the results of a particular class are bad.

But in college, the environment is different, if the study you will become great in life and but if you use the power of freedom in bad ways then it’s not good. No matter they are teaching.

Now in college, you need to find the ways to learn by your own. That’s why college provides libraries, newspaper, and internet facilities. It’s because, college authorities and professors want you to learn, how to learn independently. It’s because learning is a continuous process in life. But you can’t do a course or join degree programs again and again. And you can’t spend 50 years in the college for learning.

That’s why college makes you responsible for learning. They provide you the freedom to choose your interest. They provide you the masters and experts. They provide you dress, lunch, bag free environment to learn, how to learn and install learning abilities inside you without the help of teachers.

4. Knowledge about various aspect of career and life

In college you got various things for analysis such as you got classmates from different areas and cultures. Some of them are highly intelligent in subjects, some of them are great in sports and leaderships and some of with YO YO. So, you get the sense that no matter how intelligent you’re in the subjects, but there are other people too. Now you get here, sense of competition. The sense of competition will help you later when you apply for the entrance examination and job interviews.

When you see the similar interest and hobbyist people, you got attraction and sense of friendship. Now people with similar interest create a company. And the thinking and steps of the company will give positive and negative benefits.

For example, if you like to study, if you like to learn, if you like to spend time productively in college, you find there are others people from different regions think similarly. And you join them. Now, this type of company is great for students, and that helps them to learn from each other that help to perform great in the college. It’s because they analyzed the environment and they start adapting it with their capability and thinking.

In another side, you like to enjoy the college life, you will get similar to people.

The fact is here, Horses are never compatible with donkeys. And the donkeys don’t want to know about the benefits of living and join the party with horses. Both have the reasons. But it’s about goals and career development.

So in the college students do the analysis of bad and good companies and they analyzed that which company will benefit them in long run. And how it will impact on their own self-respect and acceptance of their parents after joining or building a connection with people in the college.

So, these are small things but students got similar experiences in the college that enables their conscious and subconscious mind. In college with the conscious mind they do the things they love, but in the subconscious mind, they keep analyzing what is good and what is wrong. So, I think it’s great but challenging to remain in the good company in college.

5. Improvement Communication skills

Well, you can improve communication skills in others ways too. But college environment is something in which you have no experience. Such as political interface, basic understanding how our government works, analysis of good and bad things etc. You learn and deal with people and when you start convincing the company, class, students, and administrators, you r communication improve. You got and learn words and vocabulary, you learn how to express, and you learn how to handle the things with communication skills. As I written in another article about the importance of communication skills for students that explore how these above activities in daily college life impact in our life and career.


Now there are always possibilities in adding more points, but my goal is not here, to keep writing and adding more imaginative points. My goal is that you analyze the college education and environment. Why college education is important and I think you the basic understood in the above 5 points about the importance of college education.

But here is the bonus point of this article: – College education, freedom, confidence and sense of responsibility in between the 17 to 23-25 with great communication skills are a great way to build the foundation of your career in college. You have the two choices like you want to take the advantages of freedom for your career building, or you just want to enjoy and then let’s see things later.

Tomorrow is built on the hopes, what we did today. So, make your colleges days as beneficial as possible for you, your career, your parents and this country. And I know all the things are in your subconscious mind and one day you will make your parents, teachers and the whole nation too proud on you. Yes, you can do it.

Jai Mata Di!


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Just want some feedback on my writing.. thank you.

Education, without a doubt, can affect a person's future. Many job opportunities are opened for those who are more educated. A good education will not only bring talented students into the country, but also increase our life styles. Education is definitely one of the most important factors in the development of a country because it opens up job opportunities, brings up more talented individuals into the country, and increases our living styles.

Many job opportunities are opened up because of education. A proper education teaches people skills and knowledge they will need in their careers. As people become more educated, more job opportunities will be opened to the educated individuals who process the qualifications to succeed in those jobs. Therefore, education serves a key to unlock job opportunities.

A good education will also attach many talented individuals into the country. For instance, there are many foreign students choosing to study in Canada every year. They explain that for studying in Canada of is because the education system in here is better than back home. After finishing their degree, many of those students choose to stay in Canada because they are attracted by the job opportunities in Canada than back home. Hence, a good education will attract talented individuals into the country.

Education also increases our life styles. As we know more and more about our living surrounding, we can now make a choice for a better life style. For example, through education, we now understand that some common household products or insulation, such as asbestos, can cause cancer. Since then, we have switched to a safer and healthier alternative; a step towards a better and healthier life styles.

In summary, education is one of the most important factors in the development of a country. Education brings up more job opportunities for those who are educated. A good education in the country can attract foreign students to study abroad and work in the country. Also, education increases our awareness of dangerous substances in our living surrounding, thus we will choose a safer and healthier alternatives, promoting a healthier and better life style.

Hei Simone! I'm not sure what the assignment was, so I will assume you had to write an short essay.

This piece of writing is quite boring. In the introduction you say that education is good. And that's the idea in every following paragraph. It's not a wrong opinion, but try to say why education today is wrong on so many levels. For example, many teachers don't think outside the box and therefore many children get out of school brainwashed; or the "college-bubble" problem in the US; or the futility of schools on the countryside in many countries, where children are going to school on paper, not in reality. Find something that will make the reader ask himself questions about what you're writing about.

Also the text is missing a certain flow. You have chosen to go safe and use short sentences, that are however not "bound" to each other; if you take most of them separately, each could be a thesis. Try first of all to cut back on the words "education"/"educated". They're all over the text.

Ok, I know I sound very harsh and I'm sorry for that, but I'm sure you can improve this text. ;D

ok thank you for your input!!

Dear Simone,
Permit me to do a summary of your write-up.
-Education is good because it helps us improve our skills, enables us get better jobs and thus, improve our living styles and standards.
-It attracts foreign talented students to Canada.
These two sentences represent the only two messages you have been able to pass across in your essay. Yet they do not tell us how education help improve on a country's socio-economic and political development.

In my opinion, i think there are 4 steps you should take:
(1) Start by giving us what your perception of education is. In your essay, you have construed education to be the process of schooling, yet education is broader than that. It's simply a process through which an indivials acquires desirable skills and knowledge needed in him to be fit and useful to both himself and society; education is not complete unless it teaches people how help themselves in life and contribute positively to the development of the society where he might find himself in the future.

(2) the next is to help us understand what you think development is. Is it poverty reduction, increase in people's standard of living, improvement of a nation's technological know-how, political stability or reduced corruption and terrorism, etc.?

(3) next, tell us how education fixes into these issues of development i.e., the way in which educated people can help positively in national development. For instance if you consider improvement in Small and Medium Scales Enterprises (SMEs) in a country as the best way a country will rapidly develop, then your arguement here should explain how education will enable people to be enlightened, empowered, and self-reliant as to making them develope entrepreneurship skill and becoming business tycoon all on their own. By this, people depend less on government for improvement in their standard of living, more jobs are created, poverty alleviated, and nation's economy resutantly will witness a boom in few years. All to the glory of proper education and training.

(4) last, you briefly reiterate education as sin-qua-non to national development and make few suggestions as to how a country should invest more on educating the citizens.

I don't know if this helps, i just think you might need to consider it so you could improve on your essay.
Simone, I should also warn you to avoid repeating sentences like three times in the same essay. Check your 1st paragraph alone, you said something like "education giving us job opportunities" more than once. In the same paragraph you also mention "education as it helps us increase our lives styles" I think this paragraph is too small that this type of repeatitions could be tolerated.

Best wishes!

Great ideas, here!
I think maybe the essay is saying things that are too obvious. In the first paragraph, you write a few things that everyone already knows.

The key is to write about the importance of education and compare it to another important part of society.. like the military, private enterprise, social services, environmental protection, and so forth. Is education most important? I think it is... but why is it most important?

Right here, use SERVES AS:
Therefore, education serves as a key to unlock job opportunities.

Also, education increases our awareness of dangerous substances in our living surroundings, and thus we will choose safer and healthier alternatives, promoting a healthier and better life style.----I took out the word "a"


hmm good reviews guy, it will take some time for me to absorb all those info.. haha

I wonder,in essays if i give some data unrealistic but it seem to realistic Is that ok,
Example : Every years has about 500 thousand people die by smoked ( in essay about smoked)

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